Re: Eclipse Chapter 10
By: melda (69.143.240.24)
Date: 10 March 2007, at 5:12 pm
Dear Cristal,
I am somehow always late with my comments! I read your latest chapter almost right after it was posted, but I wanted to read it one more time before I wrote here.
Well, first: If Wickham only showed her deference bordering on ungentemanly behavior, I would cringe but not worry! Yet this guy stalks her and thinks about hurting anybody dear to Darcy. He really scares me! Thank G-d, for Mary King being there!
Second, about Lizzy's naivete: She is about 21 years old, she is well read, and intelligent. Considering the times when girls married at age 14, I would think she sould behave better! Thank G-d for her aunt!
What I am really curious about your story is the effect of Eclipse? Since you named the story after him (and not Cannon), I am hoping him to have some important part! Will she be taking him to Kent? I love horses and I hope nothing happens to him. Btw thank you for telling us that she will arrive at Kent safely.
Please post soon! It is so hard to wait between the posts! Hope your muse is strong and computer safe! I wish the same to our dear Laura and Sylwia and Elizabeth too of course!
melda
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- Eclipse -- Mo (70.185.154.232) -- 8 March 2007, at 4:56 pm
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