Re: Eclipse Ch 10
By:Margaret F (209.217.221.38)
Date: 8 March 2007, at 7:07 pm
Cristal
You've done a great job in depicting Lizzy's disquiet during her ride as well as the menace of Wickham. Successfully spooky! She should be grateful for the support of her Aunt Gardiner--that seems to have given her a level head as far as Wickham is concerned. Too bad that she hasn't revealed W's improper actions to her father. Looking forward to the next episode.
Messages In This Thread
- Eclipse -- Mo (70.185.154.232) -- 8 March 2007, at 4:56 pm
- Re: Eclipse Ch 10 -- Margaret F (209.217.221.38) -- 8 March 2007, at 7:07 pm
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