Re: Eclipse by Cristal

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By:melda (69.143.240.24)
Date: 22 February 2007, at 5:18 pm

In Response To: Re: Eclipse by Cristal (Sylwia)

I would love to see, for once a story where Jane and Darcy have a good understanding of each other right at the beginning. Imagine if Darcy beleived that Jane was shy as himself and that she truely cared for Charles and Jane beleived Darcy was not full of pride, but just guarded, having tender feelings towards her sister. How nice that would be!
May be then he would not dare to separate Charles from Jane and may be Jane would soften Elizabeth's prejudice against Darcy. Even with this premise there would be a lot to overcome for happy endings. But I think Caroline's nasty comments about Bennet sisters are helping Darcy towards liking them even more. So keep it going Caroline!
Nevertheless, the story is so well writen; the tempers of each individual is so palpable. Thanks so much for posting so soon and two chapters too !!!

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Eclipse by Cristal -- Sylwia (212.76.37.182) -- 19 February 2007, at 7:45 pm
- Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- Sylwia (212.76.37.182) -- 19 February 2007, at 8:44 pm
  - Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- RitaSV (24.22.150.21) -- 20 February 2007, at 12:47 am
    - Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- melda (69.143.240.24) -- 20 February 2007, at 1:27 am
- Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- Theresa (70.155.84.39) -- 20 February 2007, at 5:35 am
- Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- EmilynW (24.18.144.64) -- 20 February 2007, at 9:41 pm
- Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- Fatima (72.196.207.129) -- 22 February 2007, at 3:26 pm
  - Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- Sylwia (212.76.37.182) -- 22 February 2007, at 4:10 pm
    - Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- melda (69.143.240.24) -- 22 February 2007, at 5:18 pm
      - Re: Eclipse by Cristal -- Cristal (65.4.5.58) -- 22 February 2007, at 8:43 pm

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