Re: Ch 20
By:bonnie (208.54.15.129)
Date: 22 October 2006, at 2:15 pm
I do so look forward to the next chapter. I am thrilled and enchanted by your truly beautiful story. The subtle shades of misunderstandung, no matter how frustrating to readers , are wonderfully rendered. You have captured the abject fear of exposing one's heart to one, as you say, who may be indifferent. It seems so real and true to have Lizzy disqualify Darcy's bold (for him) declarations of love and approbation as mere figments of her imagination. Here is a woman who has read too few romance novels.
Please let Saturday come sooner than later...if you have any pull in this quarter.
Thank you for sharing this extraordinary story.
(I was simply too impatient to stop at chapter two at HG! Now I want more.)
Bonnie
Messages In This Thread
- Ch 20 -- Cristal (72.146.50.105) -- 16 October 2006, at 7:05 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Laura (69.167.184.46) -- 16 October 2006, at 10:57 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (71.133.46.8) -- 17 October 2006, at 2:39 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 4:15 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (172.190.176.239) -- 17 October 2006, at 5:48 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 6:34 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (172.190.100.116) -- 17 October 2006, at 9:12 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 11:00 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (71.133.46.8) -- 18 October 2006, at 4:10 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- bonnie (208.54.15.129) -- 22 October 2006, at 2:15 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Laura (69.167.184.46) -- 22 October 2006, at 3:29 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- bonnie (69.109.183.29) -- 22 October 2006, at 9:19 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 22 October 2006, at 7:33 pm
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