Re: Ch 20
By:carrie (172.190.100.116)
Date: 17 October 2006, at 9:12 pm
It seems like nothing is error free. Even published works often have mistakes. The one thing I've noticed is than used when the word should be then. I've enjoyed your work so much that I really haven't noticed anything else. Keep it up please, I'm sure I'm not the only one who is anticipating the next chapter.
Messages In This Thread
- Ch 20 -- Cristal (72.146.50.105) -- 16 October 2006, at 7:05 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Laura (69.167.184.46) -- 16 October 2006, at 10:57 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (71.133.46.8) -- 17 October 2006, at 2:39 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 4:15 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (172.190.176.239) -- 17 October 2006, at 5:48 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 6:34 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (172.190.100.116) -- 17 October 2006, at 9:12 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 17 October 2006, at 11:00 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- carrie (71.133.46.8) -- 18 October 2006, at 4:10 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- bonnie (208.54.15.129) -- 22 October 2006, at 2:15 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Laura (69.167.184.46) -- 22 October 2006, at 3:29 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- bonnie (69.109.183.29) -- 22 October 2006, at 9:19 pm
- Re: Ch 20 -- Sylwia (212.76.37.164) -- 22 October 2006, at 7:33 pm
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