Yes, please we want to know about all our errors. I'll add that we are trying very hard to have the story written in British English, and we've been rereading it thousand times, and we still find some errors. I'm starting to think that the errors are in fact some living single-celled organisms that reproduce through binary fission.

We are open to any comments, not only the nice ones. We want to write another story, and so we need to know how the story is read by the readers. It’s very possible that we’re mistaken in what we think people like, as we really cannot have any sensible distance to our own work.

This story is generally finished, but it was written in a very unorthodox way, and so the editing is much more than it usually entails. We also write new parts as we go, although that really goes fast. What takes much more time is making something new and concise from the old parts that were written in a very chaotic way.

Thank you, and please bring whatever you find.

Sylwia