Re: Comments for the Lizzy and Darcy Story
By:Betty ( 64.35.145.92)
Date: 8 August 2006, at 5:45 am
I really think your choice of a jumping off point is an interesting one, but it seems a strange place to do it since they already love each other at that point in the novel. It will be interesting to see how you make it work. I think you're doing a good job already. Darcy seemed quite cold from Lizzy's point of view! I'm glad they met finally, but I wish they talked more together!
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